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Soundless serenity,
A vastness of white.
Reflecting rays
Of sunshine,
Giving light
Giving life
To a realm of stillness.
Standing in the cold
I remember your face,
Pink flushed cheeks
All covered in wool.
Surrounded by silence
Deep and resounding,
Moving inside us
Softly deafening.  
Winterland.
Colorless sand,
Trickling shards
Sparkling in your hand,
Tastes sharp
Like rusty shivers.
All beauty and frost
A heart of ice
Dancing on fire,
Embers of desire.
You looked so alone
On a blanket of ivory,
I just had to have you
For the grandeur
For the glory.
An act of chance,
An avalanche
Falling down on me.
All beauty and frost,
And I am so lost
In this frozen scene.

"Winter time winds blew and freezin'
Comin' from northern storms in the sea
Love has been lost, is that the reason?
Trying so desperately to be free."
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Xokpet Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013
I can watch the vision unfolding before my eyes. :D
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Blood-Red-Cure Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I love snow, and you described it perfectly!
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Mumikansou Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Aww thank you. And if you didn't notice, I never used the word snow ;)
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Blood-Red-Cure Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I thought that's what you were talking about.
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:iconmumikansou:
Mumikansou Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh it is! Nvm... lol
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dancingdawn62 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I love it. It's o descriptive..
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Mumikansou Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you ^^ there hasn't been any snow this winter so it was a little difficult to imagine all the details.
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dancingdawn62 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, despite that, it turned out well. :) And you're welcome. =D
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Mumikansou Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I appreciate your kind words :)

Won't you please join my poetry group? :iconpentopage: :aww:
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dancingdawn62 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Of course. I love poetry. I write some, you should read it if you like.
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